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Correction Redundancy WordinessSet 1

1Is this correct? "Cats can climb up trees quite adeptly."

2Which sentence is the most concise way to say 'The kids are playing in the area outside the house'?

3Editing a document to ensure it is concise means checking for:

4There aren't ..... buses for us. We always have to wait.

5Fix the sentence: The team worked on planning the event, decorating the venue, and they set up the equipment.

6Apply proper grammar rules to eliminate redundancy in the following sentence:'The final outcome was completely finished.'

7Although my apartment home is smaller than the country house, it has expanded in new ways.Justin can improve the clarity of sentence 1 by changing it to-

8Which principle explains why we prefer "He runs" over "He does run" ?

9Your friend texts you, 'We ain't got no time to finish.' Which is the best way to revise this sentence for a formal essay?

10Correct the mistake in the sentence by choosing the best correction: I love the style of this house. It is so cold ..... attractive.

11The device is a home run for players who want to and are interested in maximizing their skills at the plate.

12How can we avoid repetition in the part in bold?"Some people go out of their way to make travel convenient and comfortable. Dervla Murphy doesn't go out of her way."

13Decide whether the following sentences are Correct or Incorrect.Maybe it is caused by human error, and maybe it is totally a coincidence.

14Choose the best way to correct the sentence: Everyone warned the child not to get too close to the dog in the house that snarled all the time.

15By obeying the speed limit, we can save energy, lives and it costs us less.

16Even in complex, highly technical reports, readers value conciseness.

17How would you correct this sentence to make the sentence concise? The empty house on the side of the street was vacant.

18You can eliminate all fillers from your writing.

19What is the correct way to rewrite the sentence 'I can't hardly wait for the weekend' to avoid a double negative?

20Which is the best way to revise the sentence?Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all.

21Which word will you remove to make the sentence grammatically correct? The landscape was verdant green.

22He also says that the team should go into a negotiation with .....

23Choose the most concise option: "The reason why the event was postponed is because of the rain."

24Electric heat can take up more space in the house than other conventional systems.

25Which sentence removes the double negative?

26Eat your foods when you are doing an experiment or activity.

27The language in your paper needs to be ..... and words need to be chosen for their precision

28Read this sentence with a double negative:'I can't never find my glasses when I need them.' Which option shows two grammatically correct ways to rewrite the sentence?

29Remove redundant details: "The small, tiny kitten played with the ball of yarn."

30Which of the following sentences is most concise and clear?

31Which of these sentences about a quiet concert is written correctly?

32It was snowing but we decided to drive to Aberdeen anyway.

33Define Wordiness .....

34Unnecessary, off-topic, not needed

35ZOMBIE SENTENCE! Correct the excessive nominalization:You must accept the offer before you can commence enrollment at university.

36Which sentence is the best revision of this awkward sentence: "I went to that concert last night already" ?

37On recent ACT's, the shortest answer is correct and absolutely right, for about half of all English questions.

38Which is the best way to revise the sentence?It is very unusual to find someone who has never told a deliberate lie on purpose.

39Correct the misuse of a double negative: I don't need no help.

40NO CHANGE or revise? I think maybe I might possibly have met them all.

41Which sentence would be improved by deleting a word?

42Keep it short and simple; avoid .....

43Remove redundant details: "The tall, tall man walked slowly down the street."

44It is not important to decide what methodology you have to use for your research report.

45Our friends at home hadn't no fun.

46What is the best way to revise this sentence for conciseness? 'In the event that it rains, the picnic will be canceled.'

47As a military man, one of General Dwight Eisenhower's greatest achievements was his role in the preparation and planning for the Allied D-Day invasion at Normandy.

48I lost many opportunity jobs

49Even when joking around, you never should never

50Change the following sentence:The long, narrow ledge jutted out from the balcony and stuck out.

51What does she mean about rule number seven?

52Not being accustomed to living in the wild, the monkeys which were bred in captivity have struggled to adapt to the forest.

53Which of the following scenarios best illustrates the idea that 'longer doesn't mean better'?

54Slashing wordy expressions means .....

55Which option is more concise?

56A: The concert (1) will be held next two weeks. (2) am not known which song to sing. B: (3) Don't worry. I will prepare (4) lots of songs and bring it for you. Fill in the blanks with the correct words: (1) ..... (2) ..... (3) ..... (4) .....

57They eat ..... fast food.

58In conciseness, can you delete words?

59For each and every book you buy, you will receive a free bookmark.

60The drains are ..... with rubbish so the water cannot flow smoothly.

61Which word is not needed? skilfully the goal the winning footballer scored score