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1What beauty it is to see if the world is full of kind people. Courage marks the greatness.

2Which sentence revision is the clearest? Original:When Jake handed his dad the hammer, he dropped it.

3(A) Stay home for a while. (B) Find easier classes. (C) Take fewer courses in the future. (D) Look downstairs to find the classroom.

4Can this sentence be reduced: "Once your thesis is submitted, the grade will appear in your student's account"

5What change needs to be made in sentence 24?(24) Zoey found a dry spot on the beach and began her work.

6What is the correct way to rewrite the sentence?If people would pick up trash after they use the park, it would always be clean.

7Listening rooms are close to .....

8Which sentence is most effectively and correctly expressed?

9Which of these is the correct revision for clarity? "The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog."

10We should throw away reusable things.

11How can you best fix the unclear sentence:'The mayor announced at the festival the city would build a new park.'?

12The lunch lines at O'Connell are long and tedious.

13You should avoid specifying the position you are seeking on an application form so that you will seem more flexible.

14I will take the necessary action to solve this issue.

15Is this sentence correct?Ms Sian's dog likes to ride on her motorbike.

16How to best rewrite "The duration from New York and London around 1,400."?

17Re-drafting does not require us to

18If no suggestions are given by the Spelling and Grammar check, you can manually ..... the correct spelling in your document.

19The business owner was upset because he didn't make a profit that year.

20The chart will ..... the results clearly.

21As a foreign student, you can get involved in social activities quickly because .....

22Choose the sentence that is correctly revised for clarity: "The man, who was tired, sat down quickly."

23Haley get up in the morning and get ready for

24Rewrite the following sentence to make it more concise: In my personal opinion, I think the movie is interesting.

25Which revision best improves this choppy series of sentences? 'I got home. I did my homework. I played video games.'

26NO CHANGE or revise? She liked the finer things in life she always had to have nice clothes and fine food.

27Because the travelers had a flat tire, we stopped to help them fix it. can this sentence be shortened?

28Who does he spend his free time with?

29After lunch, you buy chips and candy from the concessions cart

30Humans have been a very successful species on earth. They have very large, very diverse populations spread all around the world. As a result,

31Please go to customer service on level 4 for any complaints or exchanges.

32The student should clean their litter

33Keep the dream alive; hit the snooze button!

34Editing is important to ensure the story is professional.

35When completing a job application form, always leave any items blank that do not apply.

36Nothing among the myriad challenges encountered during the expedition is insurmountable when the team works in unison.

37Which is the best way to revise the sentence?The cafeteria was very busy, and several students were yelling, and several were eating, and several were on their phones.

38How can you make your sentences easier to understand?

39Write this sentence correctly ..... The only way to really understand what someone thinks about you is to just ask them.

40Which sentence best integrates vocabulary to convey clarity of meaning?

41Building tsunami resistant buildings can save human lives.

42The goods and services tax creates audit trails (A) / across the income and production chain, (B) / and is driving formalisation of the economy and (C) / better measures of MSME value addition and cash flow. (D)

43Revise the following sentence:The Valencias were amazed to see a bear on the main street while vacationing in Jasper.

44Sentence CorrectionThe cricketer, whose record is exemplary, bagged an eight-year endorsement contract with a sportswear giant.

45How to make the sentence more formal '' all farmers are poor"

46What change if any needs to made needs to be made to this sentence?The new boy in school is named after his dad Roy

47Parallel structures keep the sentence consistent. Below are a few examples of parallel sentence structures.

48Improve the sentence: 'She is a person who is very talented.'

49All proposals should use easy-to-understand language and show the value and benefits of the product or services being recommended.

50Pablo enjoys drawing in the evenings.

51Revising writing in a groupSelect one:

52Department stores sometimes offer gifts to entice people to shop.

53If young children have good friends then they will have a good relationship with their brother or sister.

54Improve the following statement in a formal language:" I think/believe that the issue of global warming will be the primary concern at the meeting."

55What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? The wind blew the leaves in the yard.

56What is your greatest strength?

57We discovered that this treatment was good in curing cancer. How can this be rewritten concisely?

58DETERMINE IF THE SENTENCE IS CORRECT (C) OR INCORRECT (I)~ If students cannot concentrate for sustained periods of time, they will not master a skill necessary for problem solving, and, as a result, they will be less likely to become independent, creative citizens.

59Rewrite this sentence correctly: we went to the park and played soccer

60What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 9?

61They are coming to the party.