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1What is the correct way to write sentences 29 and 30?(29) Slowly we began to crawl. (30) We traveled the same path, but this time I felt different.

2Past studies have shown that employees are happier when they work in environments with natural light and sunlight.

3Choose the best answer for this question "How do you handle stress and pressure?"

4Emily wrote 3 letters this month and still wanted to write 2 more.

5Larry got so dirty playing soccer that he thought he would never get clean. However, he went through two whole bars of soap that night.

6They're ill

7Mr. Customer, I consider that the best decision you can make is to buy a printer.2. I agree with you, but I will have to save money. I will think about it

8When Sam is at bat, he usually gets a hit.Sam gets a hit most of the time he's at bat.

9Choose YES if the given sentence observes correct usage; otherwise, choose NO.We should not judge people based on their status in life.

10The little boy played hard all day without a nap. $_{Choose a possible }$$_{effect}$

11If your essay does not make sense to you, what should you do?

12Rewrite the report on the basis of the revision made and corrections effected on the report.

13Choose the best way to correct this sentence:Trevor gave a sculpture to his girlfriend that he had carved out of soap.

14I'd like to know how much it is

15We lost all electrical power at 9:00 p.m. last Monday. It wasn't restored until the following afternoon.

16Read the sentence below and decide the correction that should be made:" My dog chased three rabbits out of the woods, but they all got away.

17Choose the best way to correct the following sentence:While on vacation last December, Kyle encountered a coyote skiing in the mountains.

18(A) He doesn't know how to take pictures.(B) The garden is not colorful.(C) He doesn't have a camera.(D) He forgot his memory card at home

19We ate delicious food at the party.

20What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? The frozen pond behind the house becomes a perfect place for ice skating with friends.

21It is hot, please .....

22Although Mr. Smith was poor, he had a lot of style.

23You don't even need to have a formal lesson to pick up an instrument and join in the fun.WHICH OF THE CHOICES HELPS THE WRITER STRESS THAT PLAYING MUSIC IS AN ACTIVITY IN WHICH ALL CAN PARTICIPATE RATHER THAN JUST AN ELITIST ART FORM?

24My brother has got a toothache. He should .....

25What's a good comment about today's weather?

26Observation always guarantees accurate user behavior.

27How should this sentence be changed? And because the tanks are usually operating at the same time, the divers must be very careful when they are inside.

28Part D: Self-Management Paragraph. You can reduce stress if you ..... your schoolwork, take breaks, and sleep well.

29Practically every part of the banana tree is used by man.

30You can submit your assignment tomorrow. Yet, you have to make sure the work is complete and well-done.

31How can you best revise this sentence to make it more concise and natural-sounding? 'That's the store I got my shoes from.'

32He decided to go for a run, it was a beautiful day

33What helped the writer improve?

34I wanted to eat ice cream, so I went to the store and bought some.

35Which revision improves the clarity and coherence of the sentence below?

36Can this sentence be reduced:"The letter which you sent me arrived yesterday"

37Pick the best revision of the sentence:Repeatedly missing the mark, it was frustrating.

38Pick the best revision of the sentence:Standing peacefully in town, the city bustled.

39Choose the best statement.

40Jim has changed his point of view due to his personal experience with private health insurance and his observations as a health care professional.

41Once you master your business writing skills, you will begin to write perfect first drafts.

42We should eat food on the computer table.

43Should I accept the job offer?

44Girl: Is this paint for you art project?Boy: Yes. But I haven't finish it yet. It's still more details. Girl: I think you're very talented.How will the boy response?

45You should expect to revise your article several times before it is published.

46Complete the sentence if required.Run!

47Of the many familiar favorites, Papa would pick up his guitar and play all of our familiar tunes.

48The two greatest days of my life were: the day I graduated from college and the day I met you.

49If one party offers a special concession that is not normal in their business, they should .....

50As you revise, make your writing clear by using specific verbs, concrete nouns, and vivid adjectives.

51Your friend texted you:'I can't find them anywhere.' Which of the following sentences revises this message to be the clearest?

52What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? We will be going to the park after school with the dogs.

53Pick the best revision of the sentence:The patient was referred to a doctor with stomach pains.

54Which of the following is most concrete and precise?

55Best / like / I / Vietnamese /.

56While travelling in a bus, you should .....

57Artificial light sources are costly aside from lowering worker productivity.

58I like eating. It is delicious.