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Sentence Improvement No Improvement Option FormatSet 3

1What's wrong with the sentence below?In my essay I will demonstrate how previous generations have a negative bias towards Generation Z.

2I like numbers. I study .....

3Why are you interested in this position?

4How should this sentence be corrected? "We saw the horses coming, and they were bigger than any we had seen before."

5I love this type of exams

6What is the BEST way to rewrite this sentence?

7What change, if any, should be made to this sentence:Please bring your reading notebook and a pencil to carpet.

8When Leah was a baby, she had the plumpest cheeks of all four kids in her family.

9Make your message simple and comprehensible when conversing.

10Does this sentence need to be revised or is it correct as is?

11Which revision best clarifies this sentence:'The student was told after class he needed to stay for detention.'?

12If you fellowship with God often, you get .....

13If you receive constructive criticism on the job, you should focus on your feelings as much as possible.

14Which of these sentences is correct in a letter?

15Correct the mistake in this sentence:The teacher is quite angry.

16She felt like her spirit was renewed and refreshed.

17Improve the sentence:"It says in the Times Picayune that it will be cold tomorrow."

18Passage 1You should choose the alternative that best expresses the idea in standard written English and is worded most consistently with the tone of the passage. If you believe that the original version is best, then choose "NO CHANGE."

19Can you make this sentence better? My sister refuses to give back the clothes she borrowed.

20The general concern is in the social security and health of the general welfare of employees and their families.

21The best revised sentence will have grammatical mistakes and present illogical thought in its wording.

22What change, if any, should be made to in the following sentence?My sister cut the cookie in halves, so we could share it.

23The best revised sentence will make grammatical and logical sense as it relates to the given topic.

24Which is the best way to revise the sentence?It is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days.

25They probably won't hear us.

26What makes a sentence better?

27As a rule after classes I go ......

28What is the best way to rewrite this sentence?:summer is the best time of the year.

29What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence?The dog hurt its paw.

30What change to sentence 4 would improve it?

31Many people wore colorful headdresses on their heads to be on the festive mood.

32Which is the best way to revise the sentence?Some people believe in capital punishment, while other people are against it; there are many opinions on this subject.

33CLARIFY THIS SENTENCEI received and read the email you sent yesterday about the report you're writing for the project. I agree it needs a thorough, close edit by an expert.

34They asked to join the game but the team was already complete.

35A BENIFIT OF BEING ACTIVE IS:

36I love reading books, they transport me to another world.

37Fix this sentence: Carla was scared of the vampire and she didn't want to go to the haunted house, because it contained a lot of vampires.

38What he said had nothing to do with the subject we were discussing.

39In the question a part of the sentence is italicised. Alternatives to the italicised part is given which may improve the construction of the sentence. Select the correct alternative. The mother has not seen the child for several months and now eagerly looks forward to seeing him.

40In winter, the air can be cold.

41Pick the best revision of the sentence:My sister with a diamond ruined my mom's necklace

42A mobile home has wheels under it.

43My mom showed me a new, innovative way to bake bread.

44How should the following sentence be rewritten to make it more engaging, while keeping its meaning intact? Priya and Elijah stroll to the shop to pick up some coffee.

45Which revision of the following sentence creates the most fluent and concise structure? You can have pizza for dinner, or you can have tacos for dinner.

46Pick the best revision of the sentence:Making up this modifier, the laptop was nearly destroyed.

47People wear different kind of clothes depending on weather.

48I don't brush my teeth every time I eat.

49Improve the sentence: 'The book that I read was very interesting.'

50Improvement is not possible unless there is some way to measure the results.

51It is said to be an integral part of the writing process.

52What change, if any, should be made in sentence 28?(27) On Jupiter and Saturn, the swirling gases are red, orange, and yellow in color. (28) The gases on Uranus and Neptune are blue or blue-green in color.

53Sentence CorrectionThe solution that he worked out was not only correct but complicated.

54Improve the sentence:"When students raise their hands, it means they have a question."

55You should recycle empty cans and bottles. Don't ......

56Rewrite the following sentence to make it more concise: At this point in time, we need to start the project.

57Identify each sentence as one of the following: a. correct b. incorrectAll students should attempt to help themselves to learn to write well.

58What change, if any, should be made in sentence 16?(15) I pulled my hand out of the vine. (16) Bees came flying out of there, too! (17) I must have disturbed a nest.

59Each country's government has been shaped by

60Choose the most academic revision of the sentence:You can use this model to optimize the water supply.

61There are several excellent reasons to consider purchasing our new OfficeDataPro software. This sentence is clear and concise.